Smoking
French
poetry whore
cigarettes
o n e,
a f t e r
t h e
o t h e r
i wet my lips,
i puff—
frail
particles of
d i f f u s e d
s m o k e
S
d u
n m e r
u r
o
i bat my eyelids,
i stare away.
and puff—
o n e
a f t e r
t h e
o t h e r
still no
words, yet
i perceive
some
d a r k
v e r s e
s m o k e
has subtly
embraced
— p o s s e s s e d —
my f e a t h e r e d
d r e a m s
and,
while
i type
a widowed
v e r s e —
for a poem
i may
have dreamed—
but will
never, in ink,
b i r t h
smoking
French
poetry whore
cigarettes
o n e,
a f t e r
t h e
o t h e r
a drunken
song
waltzes
around
i n
m y
h e a d
“they’re not good for you.
he’s not good for you.
stop wasting
y o u r
b r e a t h
a w a y
remember—
smoking
ain’t good
for
the
l i v i n g .”
i n h a l e.
e x h a l e.
s m o k i n g
o n e ,
a f t e r
t h e
o t h e r
a
subtly
s o o t h i n g
d a r k ,s m o k e d
v e r s e
e
s m
e m e b
c r
a
thank you Secrets 🖤 there seems to be a somewhat dark cloud around that i’ve taken to exploring more at length lately… let’s see where this takes us 😉 glad you find the piece intriguing!!!
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks for this feedback!!!!!!! So sorry I didn’t see this comment earlier, it got filtered out incorrectly. Plus I haven’t been too active over the last few weeks, which kinda sucks…
Anyway, really cool you enjoyed reading it, either as a poem, or as a song. You can try to write some music to it if you’d like, that would be awesome haha.
Merci!! 😉
It’s really fantastic and inspiring
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oh thank you so much for saying so, really appreciate this feedback!!! 🙂
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👌 will check it out!
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Thanks 🤗💖💖
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My word this is clever and gesh… This packs a punch. There’s a reflective darkness to it that intrigues me.
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thank you Secrets 🖤 there seems to be a somewhat dark cloud around that i’ve taken to exploring more at length lately… let’s see where this takes us 😉 glad you find the piece intriguing!!!
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it definitely could be a song, decadent of course, but a really nice song
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thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks for this feedback!!!!!!! So sorry I didn’t see this comment earlier, it got filtered out incorrectly. Plus I haven’t been too active over the last few weeks, which kinda sucks…
Anyway, really cool you enjoyed reading it, either as a poem, or as a song. You can try to write some music to it if you’d like, that would be awesome haha.
Merci!! 😉
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