He felt like sneezing;
laughing to himself;
or remaining silent
Helplessly searching
for drowsy stories
to put into words
"Finish that page!"
the choir
- w h i l e
h e h u m m e d
a h o p e f u l
t u n e -
kept chanting
And then,
just like that,
he departed
Thankful for the life
heād lived
loved
l
e
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t
LannaZee 
This is so incredibly deep. Bravo
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Thank you, lovely. It started out as something completely differently (except for the title and part of the last stanza) and evolved quite instinctively into this. Glad it resonated with you.
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Oh, poetry like that is a fascination isn’t it š
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Yes!!!!! one of the many reasons why I love (reading, writing it…) it so much š¤š¤
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